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Words (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

You wore your heart on your sleeve and poured your soul out to us but no words came. You spoke of heartache and pain and threatened us with death every day but no words came. You lay there, wrists as wide as our eyes. Regret covering your lifeless face. But no words come.

Ranger 11-Oct-06/12:56 PM
Don't like the initial cliche (wearing heart on sleeve), the rest is fine.




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