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Words (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

You wore your heart on your sleeve and poured your soul out to us but no words came. You spoke of heartache and pain and threatened us with death every day but no words came. You lay there, wrists as wide as our eyes. Regret covering your lifeless face. But no words come.

Ranger 11-Oct-06/12:56 PM
Not necessarily. There was a story here recently about a guy whose girlfriend committed suicide. She was terminally depressed and had tried to kill herself before. He didn't try to save her life, just held her for the whole day as she died so she wouldn't die alone. The poem reminded me strongly of that.




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