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Love Cuts (Free verse) by ifni

Love Cuts desire like poison fills my veins a beast writhing inside of me I sit here frozen stiff, helpless and unwilling to expose my weakness. agony like lust fills my veins as I shred myself denial an iron burning in my gut anger like fear fills my veins How _dare_ you hurt me this way? I am in flames burning in my desire for you. like danger like fear you overwhelm me choke me up spit me out tear me down know and misunderstand me. love cuts two ways it turns in my hands to bite me back like a gemini beast like a twoheaded dog like a razor love cuts two ways you injure me as I injure you we trade soulblows like kisses entangle each other consume one another hurt one another love each other only to flee each the other in pain like a razor love cuts two ways. 8.3.97 JV

ifni 11-Sep-02/10:14 PM
Yeah. At least I've grown a little in the intervening 5 years. =P




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