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How to Bleed (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Do it slowly And grimace Watch the red drops dance But never stray Never bleed alone Close your eyes Bleed in silence And be thankful that Your heart still beats

creepshow 14-Aug-06/8:16 AM
I like the "do it slowly and grimace" part...I can relate...A silent ecstacy in pain. You write from the heart.




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