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How to Bleed (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Do it slowly And grimace Watch the red drops dance But never stray Never bleed alone Close your eyes Bleed in silence And be thankful that Your heart still beats

ecargo 5-Jul-06/12:53 PM
Such a relief! I much prefer my image of you as a rather dashing, plummy, amusingly foul-mouthed/minded Bright Young Thing (more pre-Great-War Edwardian, you understand, as opposed to Sloan-ish). Carry on. And watch the ropey trajectories, would you? I just had this dry-cleaned.

P.S. I went camping with my best friend, a pocketless Gay, these past couple of days, and we laughed endlessly over "bell-end." Your fame extends.




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