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Higher education (Free verse) by ecargo

"Introduction to Fire Technology" is the most interesting offering in the catalog. I'm not sure what I'm doing hankering after such learning, more learning I suppose it's my sister's tale of the outlet smoking and the handyman who tried to put it out by blowing on it.

Dovina 2-Jul-06/7:13 PM
The understated last verse leaves us wondering, imagining, as a poem usually should. The "I suppose" line could be read as the end of Verse 2 or as the start of Verse 3, or both - a nice touch.




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