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I Never Promised You a Rose Garden (Free verse) by oneglove

Pick a petal Watch it fall One by one All for all Play the game An empty stem The answer known He still loves them A broken flower Still bears thorns A rose is lost A garden born Crimson lawns Remind one thing From dark November The light of spring

Ranger 19-Jun-06/11:36 AM
And it has thus gone from being a good poem to being a very good poem. I think maybe you'd get the reading you want if you linked an online resource with the story behind this, then we'd make the connection. Top stuff though.




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