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I Never Promised You a Rose Garden (Free verse) by oneglove

Pick a petal Watch it fall One by one All for all Play the game An empty stem The answer known He still loves them A broken flower Still bears thorns A rose is lost A garden born Crimson lawns Remind one thing From dark November The light of spring

Niphredil 17-Jun-06/2:14 PM
Wow, then I was way off the mark. I thought it had to do with some kind of rejected love... a little too obscure, perhaps you could clarify a bit? You've got a lovely concept there.




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