LilMsLadyPoet16 Jun 2006

Viole..I read as violin and violence, and Fire...I wonder which you meant.
"Silence shatters, blooming from a dark-staved scroll
Curving cries encircle this typhoon"...hmmm...
I like the delving this asks of the reader...love all the layers.
And..with all the rhyming, it would have been easy for this to have gone to crap...but you rhymed all over the place without it getting away from you...the rythm and placement of rhymes worked very well. Good job!