lmp1 Jun 2006

please pardon me, but isn't the ottoman an exceptional place for lovemaking? mm!

seriously, this is one of those owrks that really hits home with its simplicity, or rather its spartan nature. by using a few choice workds, you convey the sorrow wonderfully.

it is interesting that you remember her both happy at you and unhappy with you - and then in ecstasy with you (make up sex?) - in that order.

my only suggestion for this is to use a different verb for the last line in S3; you already used "screaming" for the angry image, so maybe a different one for the ecstatic one...

otherwise, top notch... and my condolences.