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The copper man and Labrador (Free verse) by Caducus

Somewhere on Mayfair pavements amongst the flock of drones, a jelly necked vagrant lay dead on polystyrene, dressed in shadows from Versace and copper they flicked. His Labrador licked him, then changed from gold to blue. Barking and biting at neon reapers who took away his master muzzling his grief. Embedded in the vagrants palm was a medal from King George. The pauper box is planed. Lets just bury him he's shrapnel for our conscience and I'm late for my meeting.

Edna Sweetlove 21-May-06/5:30 AM
Dear Caducus, I think you should be aware that, by clicking on the legend "view voting details" under the graph below, you can see who has voted how many points to you. By clicking on the IP number of an anonymous voter, you can see if the computer has identified it as being associated with a member or not. I have done this in this instance and it seems you have voted yourself a 10 no less than 5 times! Whilst I feel entitled to vote myself a 10 once occasionally (pour encourager les autres), I feel this is excessive and might get you a little bit of mockery from people less charitable than myself. To redress the balance slightly I gave you (anonymously as you will see) a 1. Best wishes.




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