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My Prayer (Free verse) by dana071287

I cry, come closer to me, it is You I want to see. Flooding my life with your love, love that is sent from above. I am crying out to You, I want a heart that is new. Revealing to me Your way, from You I will not stray. Be reflected in my life. In me let a fire burn, and for You may my soul yearn, so You may take away my strife. To You alone will I pray for You to show me the way. My heart will You please renew, I want to follow you, too. I look to heaven above, and cry for more of Your love to share with the people I see, to say what You mean to me.

Dovina 12-May-06/9:28 AM
I think God listens to this kind of gushing, but I can't imagine Him doing anything about it. Too sentimental, too little desire for real change.




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