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Winter (Haiku) by morffrom

Winter comes early A butterfly is frozen A tear in heaven

god 11-Sep-02/10:12 AM
Maybe its not quite a butterfly yet, still coming out of the chrysalis !-anyway the poet seems to be indicating that the premature death of any creature is a cause for sorrow, a buddhist credo of which even tarquin should be aware-I agree with him 8/10




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