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Through Poetry (Free verse) by newdawnfades

Through poetry reflections of your spirit shine like little crystal shards tracing the sky in their path Like a child absently drawing in no particular direction content to find a path with fingers, hands, emotions, joy, sadness. Let no wall block, let no chains bind the creative self for that is the true and only self that matters.

Ranger 28-Apr-06/1:30 PM
Stanza two is good, however I didn't really find the piece as a whole stayed true to the title. Well no, I did...just not what I wanted from the title. That doesn't make sense. What I mean to say is that whereas this is a nicely-written piece, I disagree with the message. Poetry needs certain chains to turn it from train-of-thought gibberish into genuine beauty. As does all art.
However, I do like it as a gentle read.




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