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Euclidian Insanity (Free verse) by tryplsyted

Squares twirl as pairs into circles that swirl, spinning in pi across the lines that bind to realign, I take my life and survive inside this fractured diamond mind, where I shine, and spend my time pioneering an ancient space alive inside this place, I experience the hyper states of hyper space, as exotic dimensions of geometry begin to tremor, and rattle in silent slipstreams of violent transformation, altering the vast currents of vibration into shifts of frequency, that render the spatial projections of my locality into a galactic manifestation, triggering micro explosions of stellar equation, that ultimately drives the mind I have left behind, as I slip further into the infinite rearrangements of the insane and deranged.

Enkidu 27-Apr-06/9:02 PM
This could be more polished, but chances are it wouldn't be nearly as good. Loved the title, love the poem, kudos. *10*




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