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I Sleep (Free verse) by Sunny

I sleep to fight off yesterday’s embers, I sleep to separate one dawn from the next, I sleep as a nomad that listlessly tosses one day’s plain and settles in on another, I sleep to show the people my lovely side-my separated hair and glaring eyelids. Life remains outside, staining morning in it’s conclusions… when I sleep to dissever from reality, to discriminate from sin that divides my head into halves. I ramify from the heavy flesh, lazy and mortal, at night.

Sunny 27-Apr-06/10:04 AM

Amanda,
First off, you exactly right on your thesis about separation that takes place by way of sleep...this makes me very happy that you picked up on this HUGE theme going on here.
Second, in L2S2 you mentioned of my intended meaning of "plan" instead of "plain" is not correct. I meant to use "plain," which is a corrilation to the nomad metaphor & the lands they "separate" from everyday, or quite frequently anyway...double meaning here, you see?
Thanks so much for your commentary, accuracy of the underlying pattern in the theme & all of your knowledge given :)

~Sunny

P.S.-I'm a she, ha ha :)




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