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I Sleep (Free verse) by Sunny

I sleep to fight off yesterday’s embers, I sleep to separate one dawn from the next, I sleep as a nomad that listlessly tosses one day’s plain and settles in on another, I sleep to show the people my lovely side-my separated hair and glaring eyelids. Life remains outside, staining morning in it’s conclusions… when I sleep to dissever from reality, to discriminate from sin that divides my head into halves. I ramify from the heavy flesh, lazy and mortal, at night.

Sunny 24-Apr-06/3:07 PM
OK, thanks for the 8, but in response to your "rant" back, Ranger & Dovina, believe it or not I DO comment on other's work, maybe not on yours all the time, but I do write my share of critiques.
Since all the "good poets" have left due to little commentary, & there is no poets left to "learn from," I would only feel a bit silly to stay here & dwell in a place I feel I cannot be learned from or just considered mediocre, whether I am to you all or not...can't help but make me wonder if all your critiques were because I'm an easy read or easy reading material that can be picked through by the "bigger fish".
After listening to this conversation of sorts, who wouldn't be tempted to pick up their things & go...why not, all the "real poets" have.




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