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I Sleep (Free verse) by Sunny

I sleep to fight off yesterday’s embers, I sleep to separate one dawn from the next, I sleep as a nomad that listlessly tosses one day’s plain and settles in on another, I sleep to show the people my lovely side-my separated hair and glaring eyelids. Life remains outside, staining morning in it’s conclusions… when I sleep to dissever from reality, to discriminate from sin that divides my head into halves. I ramify from the heavy flesh, lazy and mortal, at night.

Dovina 24-Apr-06/3:02 PM
I find Eratosphere much less friendly than Poemranker. You cannot comment to each other as we do here, and the administration keeps a tight grip on what they consider misconduct. In short, I don't see why so many more people use it than use Poemranker. Nevertheless, you have to go where the poets are, and they are not here anymore for the most part.




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