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Sun's color (Free verse) by annadoc

Catch the sunlight in your hands, Weave it into multi-colored strands, Watch as prisms of color and light drift softly in the air, and bask in warmth as it dances in your hair, Feel its touch upon your back hold and mold it, shape it, refract it, ...indeed, imagine that ...

annadoc 21-Apr-06/5:11 PM
Thank you for giving me food for thought. I use to love the streaming sunlight (when I was young) coming in the window.
I would think about changing title to Sun (Play)?




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