ALChemy13 Apr 2006

I guess if you can except that the moon talks and plays in the poem then it shouldn't be much of a leap to get to piggy back rides. It also brings out the childish quality of the poem, me thinks. If this had been about a grown up I think I wouldn't have gotten away with the metaphor, so good point.

I'm thinking now about changing the ending to "Let only love and smiles remain." or something like that.

Have a happy Easter this Sunday D. :)