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Shy, quiet (Free verse) by Ranger

A cagier lightning strikes with care. Cat-like cautious side-step splits purple rolling pillow sky, clouds Swift glancing light Pause- Over ground voice, left back crackles like static, moving, catches up - hovering Turns- Moves again to find the earth has spun away

MacFrantic 4-Apr-06/11:50 PM
Wow, this is great, except for the way the first line is broken up. Would've done it differently. So, *9*




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