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Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) (Free verse) by ALChemy

Oh morning girl, let your tears fall. Though mother sky and father light are engaged in such a turbulent fight I will hold you safe by day or night, through thunder and through squall, through whatever fates befall. Come, ride on my shoulders Sunshine. Let us play in the midst of the rain. Let us ride out the storm and in time Let love and smiles heal pain.

ALChemy 30-Mar-06/8:44 AM
Wow! I'm flattered. First you put Lord Byron and me together in a sentence and then you dedicate an obtuse rant you ineptly disguise as a play about me.

Many of your poems resemble this pretentious, pompous drivel that you've written here. Those are the ones that are hellacious dumps.

As for me being a redneck? I've only lived in North Carolina for a year so I haven't deserved the honor of such a distinction yet.
It's nice to see you were obsessed enough to check my user info though.

Does it bother you that I criticize your poems without giving any specific and useful remarks? I guess you know how the people you've criticized feel now don't you?




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