poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy.

ALChemy30 Mar 2006

I had thought of using father wind. It was more of a visual thing, sky + light make the sun in visual composition. Plus father light is representing the lightning in the storm metaphor. You make a good point though and you did it without being insulting which puts you way above many others in my book. I'm definitely thinking about a rewrite.