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Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) (Free verse) by ALChemy

Oh morning girl, let your tears fall. Though mother sky and father light are engaged in such a turbulent fight I will hold you safe by day or night, through thunder and through squall, through whatever fates befall. Come, ride on my shoulders Sunshine. Let us play in the midst of the rain. Let us ride out the storm and in time Let love and smiles heal pain.

ecargo 29-Mar-06/8:08 AM
Nah, I'm just pretentious. Like Madonna, I'm fluent in "Mockney."

I write twee poems about my niece all the time, e.g.:

My pink girl, cat-lick clean and shining,
you smell of icing and tears,
the warm press of you heavy,
heart-hand, heart-bloom.

Oh, crap, now in the interests of "twee" neice poems, I'm going to go post my "skiing with niece" poem that I can't seem to fix to my satisfaction. Also, I've got nothing else done and I'm helpless in the face of "User Can Post New Poetry."

Please be sure to comment that it's twee (or an even more awful word, like "precious."




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