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Likeness
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Around here the people have your eyes And your deathly glare And they all look at me Through me I'm sure of it I walk the streets with a downcast smile Let your hands reach for me And abhor your pretty fingers I wish you were--
ElmoBeavisButthead
19-Mar-06/5:19 AM
The poem was short but nice. The title I think should be renamed though..Other than that good job.
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