ReplyTo a comment on Birthday by Dhanesh M Kumar.

ecargo15 Mar 2006

Clearer than some of your others. How is "a" morning dew moribund (on the point of death, but moribund also has the connotation of stagnancy, a lack of vitality, and dew, in contrast, changes to something else). Also that 'moribund' line isn't a complete thought, it just flops around limply.

I think I see what you're saying here, but it seems a rather wordy way to say that age doesn't matter, and, yet, it does.