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Winter (Haiku) by morffrom

Winter comes early A butterfly is frozen A tear in heaven

Tarquin De La Bog 10-Sep-02/11:57 AM
This is both sweet and lovely, but also inaccurate. Is a frozen butterfly (note the 'r' in the correct spelling) really a tear in heaven? I very much doubt it, but for your beautiful imagery you score 8 regardless. However, the haiku is rather whimsical and vague. What exactly are you trying to convey? I have no idea, and I suspect that you don't either.




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