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The Ocean (Haiku) by Fayt

Salty ocean waves, Always moving with the wind, Bringing life to all.

lmp 6-Mar-06/12:14 PM
i like this, but i'm going to engage in some semantics here: the ocean doesn't bring life to anyone/anything. in fact, it doesn't bring. life exists because of the ocean's properties, but a fair amount of death happens because of the ocean, also.
i like the ocean. i like what you have written. i guess i just see the ocean as a formidable force of nature that can cut in both directions. this haiku shows only one edge of the blade.




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