poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger.

LilMsLadyPoet3 Mar 2006

Favorite lines and/or good rythm:

Romancing time for peace of mind before his deadly fall

to him so fast
It crashed and got itself buried in the distant past
He clears his mind and considers this

Despite the vicious lure of the coffin's hole
Rene Descartes fled with his immortal soul

Sadly for him, his arrogance showed through
He would not run from the State(,) so he paid his due
In the bitter cell from which he would not flee
The ghost of Christmas Nevermore popped round/
for a cup of hemlock tea

It's much too much, it's far too far, Pretence gave up and screamed


Take a side, consider well, you can't sit on the fence
Because there(')s no(t) such a thing as normal common sense
The choice is yours to face the truth/ here within your head
But do you at all believe/ a single word I said?