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What is Love? (Free verse) by edgar-allen-poe-rox

What is love, an emotion or thing? What kind of feeling does it bring? Is it always “Happily ever after?” Or is it a tragic disaster? What causes it, and what is it for? And why isn’t it romantic anymore? Is it young? Or is it old? I don’t know, truth be told. Is it good, or is it bad? Am I happy? Am I sad? Does it bring sorrow? Or great delight? I think it’s both. Unless the match is right. “Hold me closely hold me tight. I never want to leave you’re sight.” What is love, an emotion or thing? I really don’t know, so please tell me.

Ranger 14-Feb-06/9:24 AM
Before I write a proper comment and risk incurring your wrath, do you want constructive criticism or will it make you rather irate if I write a less-than-flattering synopsis? I've been there myself with the first few posts; tell me what you want before I rush to conclusions here...




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