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An Understanding Woman (Free verse) by Dovina

Between us hangs a mistake, outcome of a choice, a guess gone wrong. Outside her room, options weigh, reactions vie. I take a breath. Fever and nausea brought her, lab results equivocal, abdominal scan inconclusive. She failed to jump when I pressed her belly. White blood count suggested infection. Appendicitis hardly fit the pattern. She looked sick, in a characteristic way, I saw once when the thing had burst. I opened her and remember my squint. Appendix normal, I searched her entrails. Diverticulitis, colon infection, not needing surgery. Bad judgment? Malfeasance? Shall I say the truth, or spare the pain? I open the door.

ALChemy 6-Feb-06/11:48 PM
It differs depending where you are. Some places even use a different color code. Way back when I worked at Sam's Club the codes were; Black:Dangerous weather or blackout, Red:Fire, Orange:Chemical spill, Blue:Medical emergency, Brown:Bomb threat, Code Adam was a missing child- and so on and so on. The procedures differ as well. It's funny, if you're in Sam's Club and you hear "Code Black" you're going to remember that show and run out of the building and probably into a tornado or something.




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