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Les Imagistes (Other) by Nicholas Jones

We would call this peaceful and it is quiet compared to the noise of the urban morning and the tapping of the office workers. But still there are birds and human footsteps and background hiss of traffic like scratches on an old seven inch. The imagists were wrong, I think, you see Imagism is creating coherence by having an idea and purging all that does not fit. I argue instead for contradiction through mass inclusion encompass all we can and some of it will work: a poetics like a duck on a frozen lake confused that he can walk on water.

Ranger 1-Feb-06/5:38 AM
Ah but if you take this philosophy the duck probably shot itself with the Duck-shot shell.
I actually love this poem, although it did take 3 reads to get round (*taps skull to check tiny brain is still there*).




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