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cat (Free verse) by Dental Panic

it exists only where it happens, I said, pulled my heels over my head and moved like Schrödinger's cat around all that wasn't there the bloodthirst of my small regrets, the files I kept on piling up, the hooks I simply couldn't grab, the plastic-sheeted facts, and every night a spinning fleet of private jokes was airborn from my sheltered roof, and every day the garden bloomed a life full proof

richa 12-Jan-06/2:26 PM
I agree with biteme. The second and third verses do not follow on from the principle set out in the first verse very precisely. The first verse is good though. The line breaks are a bit random.




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