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cat (Free verse) by Dental Panic

it exists only where it happens, I said, pulled my heels over my head and moved like Schrödinger's cat around all that wasn't there the bloodthirst of my small regrets, the files I kept on piling up, the hooks I simply couldn't grab, the plastic-sheeted facts, and every night a spinning fleet of private jokes was airborn from my sheltered roof, and every day the garden bloomed a life full proof

zodiac 11-Jan-06/3:16 PM
Oops. I don't mean that to sound like your poems aren't good, just that this one is great.




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