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Big bang before the uncertainty of a god Tears before they’ve fallen down Me before I've fallen in..... Skies before storms have come Moments before times drifted them away Memories before she made them blurred Fears before they’ve done Despairs before they’ve settled down Days before they’ve been seen Live when agony’s coming nearby you Live when emptiness empties you Live when abomination fills you Live when good or bad means by p.o.v Live when the dying light is raging against the darkness of you

Dovina 9-Jan-06/7:00 PM
I hate all this giddy positive attitude psychology in the face of despair. Can't you just show the empty abomination in everything and the voidness of even thinking of anything as good or bad?




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