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Privacy Compromised (Free verse) by Dovina

Crosslegged in tangled sheets, cabage-patch hair, gown hardly there, networked, conversational, rank. Sequestered and secure, but for peepers in verse, prying Toms, unwrapping hate from tough love, unmasking faith behind dogma dispelled— slipped hints of me.

Dovina 3-Jan-06/3:27 PM
Close to right. Tom is the rare one who gets it right.




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