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Privacy Compromised (Free verse) by Dovina

Crosslegged in tangled sheets, cabage-patch hair, gown hardly there, networked, conversational, rank. Sequestered and secure, but for peepers in verse, prying Toms, unwrapping hate from tough love, unmasking faith behind dogma dispelled— slipped hints of me.

lmp 3-Jan-06/3:22 PM
huh. so you write from your bed, posting to a (this?)website as soon as you awake after a wild night partying at a gala event and rubbing elbows with those who pick apart your ideas and offer critique of your work. and you try to maintain a facade, a mask to hide behind lest they hurt the real you.
that's what i get, anyway. so, who is Tom? <grin>




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