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Body & Earth (Sestina) by PoeticXTC

Oceans flow like hearts of pain Saturated skies,tears or rain Flames of stars whos lights' in vein Body & earth so hard to explain Hearts in mind, driven insane Passions of love, deny to refrain Feelings of hurt, minds refrain Trying to accept this heaert of pain Denying regrets, reasons insane The purest of sky, the oceans still rain Why do they rain? Too hard to explain Why people cry not always in vein My passion, my blood runs not in vein Emotions seem strong desist to refrain Denial is ugly no one can explain Oblivous cries. My heart's in pain Filtered sky, clouds; filled with rain Can't take it no more, I'm going insane This silence is crazy I'm going insane These fellings, these words are not always in vein No rainbows, no clouds the oceans still rain True feelings revealed, heartbreak refrain Crying rivers sob, filled with pain Emotions' a high, no need to explain Why rivers run, they cry? can't explain why? when? where? Questions. I'm going insain My heart- aching, my soul filled with pain Reasons for seasons, love never in vein Reasons for reasons, love denying refrain The oceans cry, filtered the air with rain The rivers are dry, sunshines, no more rain Oceans laughter fills the air, how to explain Regrets are endless but cease to refrain The seasons have reasons for going insain The earth is now silent; her love was in vein No more reasons to deny, no hearts of pain Oceans flow like hearts of pain The purest of sky, the oceans still rain My passion, my blood runs not only in vein. No need to explain why I'm going insain. No reasons to cry, deny to refrain.

Paul S 1-Jan-06/2:35 PM
I'm not with this style (sestina), but it looks difficult, and for that you get a 9.




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