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For Love of Baseball (Free verse) by Dovina

Baseball illiterate, unable to root except in following crowds like some poetic dunce It never scored with me how unlikely a homerun how loveable a team only as it mattered to him But he changed the game from play to real worthy of news a conflict of heroes a stage to learn from Not many get their strength from baseball not many from poetry but we who do head for the outfield alert, expecting to win

zodiac 27-Dec-05/8:51 PM
Nice sentiment, poor execution.




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