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Privacy Compromised (Free verse) by Dovina

Crosslegged in tangled sheets, cabage-patch hair, gown hardly there, networked, conversational, rank. Sequestered and secure, but for peepers in verse, prying Toms, unwrapping hate from tough love, unmasking faith behind dogma dispelled— slipped hints of me.

Dovina 21-Dec-05/1:31 PM
They look at my dispelling of dogma, and read into it a faith that they say I have, but deny.

The "slipped hints of me" escape the rein of objectivity with which I try to restrain them.




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