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Privacy (Free verse) by Dovina

Yawning fly pecker leaking unashamed on midday peopled sidewalk Flasher, sexual harasser fellator on the pier explainer on the bus hanging out his life exposed Picture federally archived security digits socialized browser sites profiled they know his mother’s maiden name why hide? His small-town cousin had it worse every purchase known every walking tracked by neighbors post office, church, or bar Of course they knew his mother not just her maiden name they knew his every outdoor act but never saw his unzipped fly or heard him say he felt exposed

Dovina 17-Dec-05/9:24 PM
Have you not heard of the Church Where Perverts Protest Privacy Invasion?

Would you not agree that a pause is inferred at the end of every unless enjamment is clearly implied? Is not a pause the same as a comma?




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