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Privacy (Free verse) by Dovina

Yawning fly pecker leaking unashamed on midday peopled sidewalk Flasher, sexual harasser fellator on the pier explainer on the bus hanging out his life exposed Picture federally archived security digits socialized browser sites profiled they know his mother’s maiden name why hide? His small-town cousin had it worse every purchase known every walking tracked by neighbors post office, church, or bar Of course they knew his mother not just her maiden name they knew his every outdoor act but never saw his unzipped fly or heard him say he felt exposed

Dovina 17-Dec-05/9:19 PM
You are sayingg that "perverts ought to have more privacy" is not the thrust of this poem, and that if I would punctuate, nobody would think that. Okay, point taken. Punctuation probably would help.




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