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War (edit) (Free verse) by zodiac

Sensible in most things, Girlie buys foil packs of yeast whenever she shops. She has certain assumptions when it comes to – but what would you call it? – husbandry, I guess, an Order of Things: a dog, a made bed, a centerpiece, more yeast than a whole year of baking would use. And, no, it makes no difference the yeast’s alive, for it is very small. A thousand, a million lives, I’ve read, but then they are so small. So neat, so desiccant, saved for some use I can't imagine: to trip my hands, maybe, looking among stacked bins of flour, soda and sugar for, I forget just what, for something edible, then. Or say for one great final baking-day. Or say we keep our peaces, the kitchen of our love as fertile, as earth-pungent, as new graves, as a bombed field. And yet we have no bread.

ALChemy 13-Dec-05/11:26 AM
I'm in Concord. Zodiac you should apply at UNCC they offer free classes to employees, great benefits and the cheerleaders look like the booty girls in those rap videos. Of course you're married but lookin' never hurt nobody.




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