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Shoebox Thoughts (Haiku) by BrandonW

She just sat and stared at our old pictures, thinking "Was I alive then"?

cyan9 7-Dec-05/11:34 AM
My problem with them is that I like to experience a poem for a while without embarking on an epic length tale of woe and mellodrama, haikus deny me that, in that they are so short they summarise the poem and leave out the detail and the beauty. I am generalising a lot here to get my opinion across, but this is the way I see it.




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