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Shoebox Thoughts (Haiku) by BrandonW

She just sat and stared at our old pictures, thinking "Was I alive then"?

cyan9 5-Dec-05/1:57 AM
Unusual for a haiku to put such a quaintly demented picture across, pleasurable to experience. I have to agree with zodiacs comment though, haiku's irritate me, they seem like poems that could be so much more.




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