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A Modern Woman (Free verse) by Dovina

Free to regard a situation ponder with reason select an attitude use it submit passively push forcefully vegetate exasperate or take it in a sporting way with humor as men want all choices lie before a modern woman We can rest think intensively ponder scientifically or philosophically or take advantage for training or spiritual retreat I’d like to meet a modern woman

Dovina 29-Nov-05/10:26 AM
The Magdeline description is beautifully written:

"With his hand and his heart he made her new. Lifted from within by the wind of the Spirit, she blew like a kite in the updraft, dancing dizzyingly while held firmly by his heartstrings 'til she came to earth again, touching down into his deep dark eyes. After that, she knew her calling."

How can I help but swoon to such romantic uplift. The power of language is so great I could almost forget how inconsistent it is with the rest of the writings of that time.




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