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Headlines (Free verse) by Dovina

. (In chronological order) Divine Sadist Creates Parasite Birds Carry Virus Around Globe Mutation Starts Pandemic Vaccine Runs Out Five Million Die of Bird Flu Ten Million Gather for Day of Prayer 20 Million Dead Medical Industry Blamed Bush Blamed Preacher Blamed Donald Duck Blamed God Blamed A Great Evil Allowed, Reason Mysterious Another Flu, Another War

ALChemy 12-Nov-05/5:53 AM
So far the responses you've recieved are:
It's about the media.
It's about blame.
It's about prophacy.

I think you're closer to pandemonium than pandemic.

Try it from the perspective of a dog.

Dog's Diary by Fido (Ree rerse)

Day 1: I chased and killed a bird
Day 2: Wrestling with Master my bite got out of hand
Day 3: In the doghouse
Day 4: The Master has forgiven me
Day 5: The Master stays home
Day 6: The Master stays in bed
Day 7: The Master forgets to feed me
Day 8: The Master stays sleeping
Day 9: I think The Masters dead


And I know you could write it even better than I did.




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