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ReplyTo a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina.

ALChemy4 Nov 2005

Has a nice sound to it but it leaves a lot of questions. What do you mean by "calks"? Why are pelicans there in the winter time? "sadness sweetly coming"? Why 13 birds? What's it about? My guess, getting pregnant.

I wouldn't mind a few more stanzas given it's pleasant meter.