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Pathetic (Lyric) by Miggy

I know you like her; I can see it in your eyes But you quickly think it is a devious crime We avoided the issue many hundred times And still, she thinks it’s nothing more but a lie I will tell her And she will love But I still feel your suffering You know tell the two of us will fit Yet after all this time with her still mine you call me (Chorus) Pathetic, I still don’t get it I have her and you don’t So why don’t you just go And even after all those times you have tried With your tricks and your lies I still have her, just to let you know Now you know how I felt back then When I didn’t have someone to hold on to Seeing you in pain now, my hand I lend Though you don’t admit it, but it’s too true You have greed I have imagination So she chose the better one Now you’ll treat me like this Even after until graduation And after everything in your life is gone, You still call me (Chorus) You thought you were the better one for her You told that to me, every single day And now you will eventually learn, Since you never change your ways, You’ll still have that bitter taste So why don’t you stop calling me (Chorus/Ending)

drnick 1-Nov-05/10:37 AM
I like that you've taken something as sad as being rejected by a girl, and rubbed it into their face. That's probably the only thing I like about this, the rest...truely is, pathetic.




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