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dialect (Free verse) by skaskowski

what do you want from me, sad, senseless, decrepit sentry? you dangle from the moulding near the ceiling like a soggy cobweb and stare through the darkness. rich, black velvet sheets slide apart so that your gaze may fall upon me while i sleep. so what do you want from me, museless monster, useless corner? i'm afraid i've moved my bed too far away to feel your saliva fall. you try to spray it. dangling smoke molecules coagulate and block those drops from hitting home. what did you say to me, whisper of jibberish, a strand of senseless syllables worming through my ear canal? was i supposed to find great joy or great sorrow in your meaningless and souless tirade? did you expect my waist or hips to bend and pull my torso toward your lips? who would you forgive first? the selfish or the selfless? and who do you more accurately resemble? and could you place a pen to paper selfishly or selflessly, what dialect of english would you ramble?

zodiac 26-Oct-05/5:27 AM
Boring. Okay, I'm bored.

God will more likely admit the selfish to heaven, because the selfish has at least secured the well-being of one person during his lifetime - himself - while the selfless has possibly not done so. For all we know, the selfless killed himself building movie theatres on small tropic islands to show Wes Anderson films to their mystified and disappointed inhabitants.

God will most likely FORGIVE the selfless first, though, because the selfless is more likely to be stupid, and stupid people deserve forgiveness. I'm not saying selfless people are stupid, I'm saying if 5% of actually selfless people are stupid, 4% of actually selfish people are. It's all about probabilities.

I predict the totally unproductive direction this conversation takes is going to hinge on whether we define selfishness as (1) working for one's own well-being before others' or (2) doing the drugs and raping everybody and stepping on kittens and never working for anyone's well-being ever - i.e., greediness to the point of self-destruction. I propose accepting definition (1) from the start. Definition (2) is for losers and Bushies and doesn't make any sense.




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